D is pointless because just rewriting it doesn't mean it is going to be better
B could help for spelling errors, but probably won't help with distracting errors
The answer could be A or C because with both of those you are getting an opinion from someone else. The answer is most likely C, because peer review tends to be more encouraged than teacher review.
When trouble began to brew in the village, the Marshal was called to re-establish order
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it's important to add a reflection in your story because it's for you to express yourself.
B) Sentence (1) in my opinion. It immediately states the point, and it tell you what the paragraph will be about.