Branch managers of First Federated Savings and Loan received this e-mail message: Please inform all personal that management ret
ains the right to check personal belongings of employees before employees leave the bank. What error did the writer make? Group of answer choices A grammatical mistake A proofreading error A failure to use spell check No error was made. The sentence is correct as written.
As per the question, the error made by the writer in this e-mail message is the 'proofreading error' which implies that he didn't recheck his message for grammatical, word choice, formatting, or spelling errors. The proofreading helps in fixing these errors before finalizing it that aids to enhance the comprehension, accuracy, and compactness of the work. The given message contains various errors like prepositional errors(lack of preposition before 'personnel'), use of wrong spelling of 'personnel', the punctuation errors, etc.. Therefore, <u>option B</u> is the correct answer.
I believe the correct answer is: B) Neighborhood Leaders Request an Inquiry About Pollution.
Option B seems to be the most neutral of the given choices and doesn't change the overall meaning of the title. Option A doesn't sound neutral and options C and D change the meaning of the headline.
