Its good to include thoughts, feelings, what was special about it..describe to the reader what it was like
If you are for the council to ban cell phones, then your thesis could be: Cell phones should be banned in privately owned areas because they... then write 3 reasons why. But, if you are against it, Say “Cell phones should not be banned in privately owned areas because.. then your 3 reasons.
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By unveiling the thoughts and actions of the character
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A: Bodine,A."School Uniforms, Academic Achievement,and Uses of Research."The Journal of Educational Research 97(2003):67-71.Web.11 March 2014.
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The first sentence is correct the coma is in the right place before the noun