Reversal of fortune from good to bad. In a tragedy, there are no winners.
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Well I know it will definitely make sense at least for someone that understands what you are writing about.
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This might just be my own opinion but i think it really is true.
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Yes but there's a mistake.
Mistake: Some where in the middle
It says "Oh hey, my im Osric, we better get started".
You have to fix Oh hey, my im Osric to, "Oh hey, I'm Osric".
But, other things are that this is very creative, it mentions words like, "Vividly, rare, miniature, rigid, desolate and lingered. These are very creative words.
And yes, thanks for that awesome lil' story!
