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Romashka-Z-Leto [24]
3 years ago
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Which is the best revision of sentence 2? Also, Ms. Gonzales told some people that she wants to be part of the club. Also, Ms. G

onzales let me know that she thinks this is a good idea. In addition, Ms. Gonzales said that she likes taking pictures too. In addition, Ms. Gonzales has expressed interest in being our advisor.
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2 answers:
Alinara [238K]3 years ago
8 0

Answer:

The best revision of sentence 2 is In addition, Ms. Gonzales has expressed interest in being our teacher advisor.

Explanation:

The question is not complete since it does not provide the original sentence to be revised, here is the missed information:

Read the excerpt from Jackson’s letter to his principal about starting a new club at his school.

(1) I have talked to twelve of my fellow students who are also interested in forming a photography club. (2) Also, Ms. Gonzales told me that she might want to help out.

The transition from sentence one to sentence 2 has the objective of adding another argument to Jackson's request. The fourth option is the best revision since it does not only uses the correct transition word in the correct context, but it also increases the importance of the sentence number one by adding teacher to the group of students that are willing to participate.

Hunter-Best [27]3 years ago
3 0
In addition, Ms. Gonzales has expressed interest in being our advisor.
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