O clock should be o' clock, would'nt should be wouldn't, and "whomever was in the know," is messed up
So that the reader understand how they lived.
<span>Adjective:</span>
<span>a word or phrase naming an attribute, added to or grammatically related to a noun to modify or describe it.</span>
Ambers long hair swayed in the breeze.
long is the adjective because its describing Ambers hair.
or
Sara had a terribly high fever
high is the adjective because its describing Saras fever.
hope that helped