The adjective would be "that I would" because it is the clause to the adjective.
8: I’ve done my homework at 6:30.
9: I ate lunch in the lunchroom.
10: It was yesterday, I sent an email to my friend.
I hope this helps
Answer:
Sorry but it doesn't sound like a thesis statement.
Explanation:
The reason why is because it's a bit of topic from the main point it's getting to and seems long when it could be summarized and still give the same message.
