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Helen [10]
3 years ago
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CAN YOU HELP ME CORRECT/FINISH MY RESEARCH PAPER? I WILL GIVE ANYTHING IN EXCHANGE AS IT IS DUE TODAY... HERE IS MY FIRST DRAFT

WITH ITS FEEDBACK IN RED GIVEN BY TEACHER, AT THE END THERES ALSO FEEDBACK.. OPEN THE WORD DOCUMENT...
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mars1129 [50]3 years ago
5 0

Here is your text with the adjustments. I've erased all the redundant information, which made it easier to read. Next, I added some suggested places in which you should insert your sources.

 I haven't put the text's correction here because it exceeded the character limits.

 I hope you can continue adjusting your text and make it even better!

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