Yes. Instead of a semicolon after Party, end the sentence. The rest is good
Although using the POV of a story can be helpful in determining the
author's point of view (especially in light of who the main character is
in the story), it also helps to consider the background details of the
author and the story itself. Things like knowing where the story takes
place and what the climate (political and social) where like as at the
time, can add to the background and understanding of the author and his
viewpoints.
Esperanza describes how her family came to live at her house on Mango Street the family owns this house so they are no longer subject to winners of landlord in at the old apartment made us friends I feel shamed about where she lives. They have been through struggle and hard times. It represents freedom, confinement and success and failure fantasy, reality. She is embarrassed about her living conditions.
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