<span>Their structure, can separate groups of people. This makes it difficult for people, goods, and ideas to move from one place to another. This would also affect the climate.</span>
I took this test and got the answer right the correct answer is:<span>My aunt has visited Paris, France; Tokyo, Japan; and Sydney, Australia.</span>
I looked it up online and found the question related to this personal statement. It is the following:
Why does the writer need to revise the personal statement?
A. sentence 1 should include the writer’s first name.
B. sentence 2 should state what the essay prompt was.
C. sentence 3 should avoid mentioning money.
D. sentence 4 should avoid the extreme opinion.
Answer:
The reason why the writer needs to revise the personal statement is:
C. sentence 3 should avoid mentioning money.
Explanation:
<u>A personal statement is supposed to be a brief description of oneself in connection to the career one wishes to pursue. It should mention one's experience, education, and strengths in relation to that field. However, mentioning money should be avoided.</u> The personal statement is not the "place" to do so. Instead of sounding ambitious in a good way, talking about "good money" - as the writer did in the passage we are analyzing here - may make one sound shallow.
The answer you are looking for is:
Simile, metaphor, hyperbole, and also personification but thats not up there.
Hope that helps!!
Have a wonderful day!!
<span>Wrong:
Everyone is welcome! We need some strong people to help with the set up come early.
Correct:
</span>Everyone is welcome! We need some strong people to help with the setup. Come early.
