The sentence had repetitive words replaced with synonyms and pronouns. "but my father disliked..." is too much alike to "my father disliked" so it would get tedious and harder to read.
They replaced it with "but he hated ... " to get some variation.
Figurative language refers to the use of words, phrases and sentences in an unconventional and non-literal manner. ... Short stories, in particular, rely heavily on figurative language -- such as similes, metaphors, hyperbole, and personification -- to make the characters and storylines come alive in the reader's mind
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Explanation:
D, as 'Gerunds' is a verb and normally ends with ing in the present tense :)
