This is a weak claim becuase it gives no facts or evidence that high school students with part-time jobs should get academic credit for working. Hope this helps and Good Luck!
The theme that can be identified from the above stanza
from “The Soldier” by Rupert Brooke is that even when the soldier died, he will
always be a part of peace and freedom that the England has attained after the
war. His death will not go in vain.