In colloquial English 'them" would be acceptable
In formal English 'they' is used accompanied by the corresponding auxilliary verb
So, you could also say Is everyone who works in this store as helpful as they are ?
A) rank is a title indicating a soldier’s position and responsibility, while grade us a letter/number combination denoting a soldier’s pay rate
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<em>The Earth probably compares in orbital speed to other planets because;</em>
A. The Earth moves faster than the planets that are farther from the sun.
<u>This is because Kepler's second law says that on its orbit, a planet will sweep equal areas in equal amounts of time. </u>
<u>Thus means that when the Earth is closer to the Sun, it's moving faster than when it is farther away.</u>
Answer:
1. You need to separate these two sentences - <em>Mr. Chakota started</em>... and <em>They were joined</em>... - these are two sentences so there needs to be a period between them.
<em>... and former oDesk colleague Josh Brianlinger. They were joined by...</em>
2. <em>"They're going to get their books from there.</em>" - the words <em>they're</em>, <em>their</em>, and <em>there</em> sound the same but mean different things. <em>They're </em>is short for <em>they are, their </em>means that something belongs to <em>them, </em>and <em>there </em>shows us where something is.
3. <em>Your files are graded on accuracy and formatting AND you're going to need to follow Rev style guidelines.</em> - these are two sentences so you either should add the conjunction AND or separate these two sentences completely by using a period between them.
4. <em>It's important that quality is consistent. </em>- here, you need to use <em>it's </em>(short for <em>it is</em>) instead of <em>its </em>(meaning, belonging to <em>it</em>).
5. <em>Use foreign language tags for foreign language speech... </em>- this sentence doesn't make much sense so you might want to rephrase it completely
6. <em>Please, no iPads, iPhones, </em><em>or </em><em>Android tablets. </em>- here, you need to use <em>or </em>instead of <em>nor</em> because English doesn't support double negatives.
I edited this by removing the "her parents" that was said multiple times. The edited/added stuff is in bold text.
“I think that Hannah’s parents will cry when they receive the tapes because they didn’t know what was going on so they weren't able to help her” one person said. Hannah’s parents were not really in her life. They weren’t home half of the time and when they were they would fight over the bills and money issues. In the show, Hannah was at home with her parents and she told them about how she was feeling and they needed to move because of the way she was feeling from everyone at her school. 13 Reasons Why is so popular because most students agree that it is based on real-life events.
Conclusion: basically sum up what you've written throughout the essay :) Was the prompt exactly so I can give a better conclusion (reply to this and I'll post it in the comments under this).
