At the horizon i saw clouds drifting aimlessly over the mountains. Farther down there was a beautiful oak
I believe it is a claim because it does focus on the main idea and what the text/passage should be about. If not I deeply apologize.
For the first red, you don't need an article before "relationship".
When you're saying "type of [word]", do not put any article before that word.
Example: "a type of device"
Not too sure about the "your back" parts. It could be your teacher does not like repition.
Also not too sure about "did". He probably wanted you to use the word "felt" instead of "did feel"
The first word of the last paragraph should be "in" not "at".
The red commas definitely do not need to be there.
Don't know why he marked "time to" and "to" red.
Answer:
answer is a
Explanation:
keyword is expository it means something that shows how this works i dont think funny characters show how tbe moon changes shape so just cross off the ones that don't make sense.
