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3 years ago

On frigid winter days, I enjoy creating interesting new recipes for

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Airida [17]3 years ago

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Answer: I enjoy creating new recipes on frigid Winter days.

Explanation: Just reverse before and after the comma and remove the comma and/or remove transition word(s). (such as, then, next, etc)

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