Read the paragraph from a personal narrative. 1. I met Elisa. 2. She was sitting on a blanket with her mom and her sister. 3. I
was tossing a softball back-and-forth with some friends. 4. It was a really hot day at the park, and my friends and I were sweating a lot. 5. We went to drink from the fountain, but the water was hot too. 6. Elisa called us over to her blanket and pointed to an ice chest. 7. “Help yourself,” she said. 8. When I lifted the lid, the tops of several brightly colored fruit bars came into view. Which is the best revision of sentence 1? He met Elisa. Last summer, I met Elisa. The next day, I met Elisa. I met her.
It is asked to read the paragraph from a personal narrative. A personal narrative in this case would be as if you were the writer or the person that in this case, met Elisa.
Your personal revision of the sentence number 1 would be I met her. (Last option).
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