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IrinaVladis [17]
2 years ago
7

What is the best way to revise the paragraph to create

English
2 answers:
Drupady [299]2 years ago
5 0

Answer: In general, use sentences of different lengths. Also consider moving adverbs or adverb clauses from the end of a sentence to the beginning.

For transitions, think about the relationship between ideas. Is it a time sequence? Use words like first, then, after that, finally. If it's logic, use words like because, since this... then that. Or therefore, as a result.

Explanation:

creativ13 [48]2 years ago
4 0

Answer:

The answer is B, combine the third and fourth sentence. Add C, as a result to the start of the last sentence

Explanation:

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