Answer:
This seems fine it just needs to be revised (grammar wise)
Explanation:
Hello Professor,
This is ___, I rewrote the essay and would like to know if I can resubmit it. If not, by any chance can I do some extra credit work to recover my score?
Thank you,
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Explanation:
A vaccine is a substance that helps protect against certain diseases. Vaccines contain a dead or weakened version of a microbe. It helps your immune system recognize and destroy the living microbe during a future infection.
Answer:
Each of these revisions is acceptable.....
Add a period after ring and capitalize the first letter of she.
Add a semicolon after ring.
Revise ring to ringing.
Explanation:
