Paragraph 1.
"Oh!," said Goldilocks, "the controlling idea is too vague. As a reader, I can't tell what your essay will really be about. When writing a controlling idea you want to be specific."
Paragraph 2.
"Oh my," exclaimed Goldilocks. "This controlling idea is too wordy. A controlling idea should be clear and concise. That was I will know what your essay is about."
Paragraph 3.
"Well, well," Goldilocks said. "this controlling idea doesn't address the prompt. When you look at what it is asking you to write, don't you see how it is asking you to explain the importance? This just says it is is important. But I do like how you thought of another word that means to not give up!"
When you do a experiment you are testing the chemicals it has molclues
Answer:
There are three main categories of evidence that are essential to gain the audience's confidence in the writer's assertions. These categories are Fact, Judgment, and Testimony. This page explores the types of evidence used in argumentation. See also the page on logic and argumentation.
I also agree that the answer is B: whom
in this sentence you are using the preposition + whom grammar structure. Whom is considered an object pronoun and is used when asking who will receive the action, which in this case, I believe is, baking those cookies. Hopefully this makes sense and good luck.
Answer/Explanation:
A: Trips take people who take Travel Sac
E: Searched up travel proverbs and twisted one
A: Travel Sac travels with you
E: Used repetition
A: Travel like you mean it
E: It popped into my head. Travel Sac seems like a pretty serious bag so
A: Travel anytime, anywhere, anyhow
E: Modified an existing slogan
A: Carry the need to travel
E: I have no idea. Like need for speed but need to travel.
A: Fulfill the need to travel
E: modified from the above.
I did more so you can choose since they aren't great.
(This was kind of fun I don't know. No it was a bit painfully difficult and cringey.)
By the way you misspelled traveler as "traverler" in the last blurb.
