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Explanation:
Jerry had just alighted the bus and lost his trombone. On realizing that he had lost his trombone Jerry started looking around. If he did not get his trombone back, Jerry’s parents were to pay nine hundred dollars for the trombone. The bus drive back home for Jerry was pure agony. It reminded him of what had happened previously in the bus where she had lost the trombone.
The trombone Jerry was about to go to trombone lessons.
Upon arrival, he realized that he had forgotten his trombone on the bus. He called the bus company's lost and found and went the next day with his father, hoping that someone found his trombone. But nobody had turned in a trombone. When he went to music school the next day, he saw his teacher Nadine holding his trombone. She explained to him that another passenger found the trombone and turned it in at the music school. Jerry was relieved and vowed he would never do anything wrong again.
Jerry stepped off the bus at the music school and went into it to see his teacher Miss Nadine, they started talking and Jerry realized that he had lost his Trombone. The teacher suggested him to go back to his house and try to find it in his way. Jerry gets into the bus and feels really sad because it reminds it to the previous bus where he had lost his Trombone, he told the bus driver what had happened and the driver advised him to go to the Bus Company to see if they have the trombone in the lost and found section.
Jerry’s father took him to the Bus company but there was no luck, the trombone was not there. Then Jerry starts regretting being so silly but the father tells him those kinds of things happen and that he is a normal kid and has done many right things, and that they will find a way to solve the problem.
They go back to the music school where the teacher tells him that a passenger from the bus had returned the trombone.
The introduction sentence isn’t very clear. But it should go something like this “The setting of the novel Fahrenheit 451 is set on a Utopian society in which Guy Montag lives”. The second sentence is pretty good and simple. The 3rd could use more description “Guy is a firefighter who is responsible for the burning of every book (What book? What does it talk about? Why does he have to burn it?) and also the houses of individuals who keep these books with them. Also put a ; on “...things are with his job; his neighbor...”
In the first paragraph I’d be best if the first 6 sentences belong to the first paragraph and the rest you use it for the 2nd paragraph and start with “Montag decides to quit his job with firm determination” As for the 2nd paragraph eliminate the transition “To start” and use something else. Also, it’s very nice just fix the grammatical errors like tv family and put “family TV” and something confuses me: Do people really ride jet cars on the streets? Or do they ride the jet cars on the skies? I think I’d be nice if you clarified this. Also, use more quotes in paragraph 2, it’s nice but you only used one to prove your veracity.
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d i believe this is the answer
Explanation:
Flawless means without faults
