The paragraph contains sentences that wander from the main topic
A. This is a logical appeal because it contains facts. The reader is not prompted to feel an emotion over this data.
The author's use of clues to hint at what will happen later in the story.
1. She played video games all day long. - B) Immature writing because there is no vivid or descriptive use of words. It makes it sound like it was written my a 5th grader.
2. Without ceasing, she gripped her controller in her hands and dominated her video games all day long. - C) Mature writing because there is a good hse of formal words, and does not overuse unnecessary vocabulary.
3. For what had the quality of time interminable, she toiled merrily at her digital amusement. - A) Overuse of thesaurus because even thought there aren't many words, the words or too trival and unnecessary, seems as if a college student wrote it.
Dreaded means disliked, great fear, so I think he simply meant that he didnt look foward to growing up. like he was fearfull of it
