The sentence "adam and eve in paradise" does not in fact contain personification.
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1. He likely is a good chess player.
2. He plans his moves carefully.
3. He takes delight in the game of chess.
4. He likes to win.
5. He sees something very deep in the game of chess. He treats it as a challenge not brought about by his opponent, but by the game itself.