Answer: Knows little about the topic.
Explanation: Because you're writing for a general audience, there isn't a target group that you particularly want reading your work, which means that it's safe to assume that a large portion of the people reading your work most likely just stumbled upon it and don't know much about what they're reading.
The most reasonable one is to list all the supporting details from the story
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The repetition of 'how we ended world war one' emphasises the fact that they are probably proud of the actions they've done to end the war. They want to inform you that they did these specific things to prevent the war from going on. It's like a reminder to the reader that the people then did a lot.
Answer:
Very good intro, especially if you are gonna major in the English department
Looks Great! A few critiques...
In paragraph 1 i think you spelled socialize wrong.
Are you taking this information from any sources?
if so, try using this to write you essays next time...
K-key idea
E- evidence -1
A- analyze evidence( give your thoughts
T-transition-( i.e.- Continuing on,
E- Evidence -2
A- analyze evidence
L- link the paragraph all together
it really helps to keep everything organized and consistent. For your introduction, try using a hook, a bridge , and finally a thesis. A thesis should ALWAYS be the last sentence in your intro paragraph.
For your conclusion start of with your thesis, go into your Main ideas of the essay, and then give something for the reader to think about (clincher)
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