Communication, creativity, similarity, vocabulary and humiliation.
Jesus is my Brother up in heaven
By following the commandments from the Lds church and thanking him for repenting for all my sins so i can live with him again
I Thank him for my blessings and ask for blessings
When i watch General Conference, all the speakers
It helps me be at peace beacuse I know he is true so i go through out my day always thinking of him and asking myself. "If he was here would i still do it?"
I learned that he loves me
-Are the words "Transition" and "Conclusion sentence" there because you used it as a guide, you are required to have them, or you need to put one in
-There was a little bit of a lot of word and sentence repeating, I feel like a different word choice could have been used, like synonyms. Like instead of knowledge being used 500 times, awareness or apprehension, understanding, or comprehension could have been used. Just look up synonyms of words you used a bunch of times or for bland (boring) words
- There is some punctuation that could be improved
- Flow is good, with a few choppy parts
- Other than those it is really good
-Let me know if you need anything else, I am more than happy to help
Answer:
Excuse me human, where is the passage
Explanation:
I cannot answer without a passage
- Karen.
Conceptual, because that is the only adjective from the list.
