I think its B. Joe's deep desire to please Pip.
Because Pip already knows he can not read but he wants her to be pleased by him, so he says he can read.
1-4 look correct to me.
for #5, you are correct that to come is not a prepositional phrase because there is no object. If I were you, I'd leave it alone and keep the one next it. all others look correct.
Google steps of writing an essay and it will give you this:
<span>Pick a topic
Prepare an outline or diagram of your ideas
Write your thesis statement
Write the body
Write the introduction
Write the conclusion
<span>Add the finishing touches.</span></span>
Answer:
Smoothly, swiftly, into place with a poet’s
Quick skill, singing his new song aloud
While he shaped it, and the old songs as well. . . .”
Explanation: