1) I will have telephones - FUTURE PERFECT 2) had looked - PAST PERFECT 3) will have won - FUTURE PERFECT 4) liked - PAST 5) eats - PRESENT
PRESENT - the verb is happening now or at present time PAST - the verb happened in the past or the period has finished PAST PERFECT - refers to a time earlier than before now. It is used to make it clear that one event happened before another in the past. FUTURE PERFECT - verb used to describe an event that is expected to happen before a time of reference in the future.
I think that a good thesis statement would help and creative hooks to keep the writer hoook and not get bored and keep reading the story. Also add transition words to connect ideas in the creative writting.