Question

PLLZZZ HELP ASAP ON THIS POEM, WILL REWARD! Do you guys like this poem? What does it make you feel, why? Is there any feedback you can give? Also, what age would the writer of this poem be (Based on the use of language, sentence structure and vocabulary?)
Burnt Tears:
When that new life was brought down, wrapped into a present,
You did not even give it a chance to see it,
you ignored it.
As she grew you taught her whatever you desired, from her language to her clothes.
When she was 7, she was spotted by a predator and became his prey,
You saw her tears, yet you did not take a chance to ask “what's wrong child.”
Everyday you gave your love to your boys, and kept her exiled
When she was 9, she insisted on not going to school,
So you grabbed her by her roots and threw her out the place you call “home”
She turned 10, and taught herself modesty
And you did not even give her support nor even smile
She had big dreams that were killed by no one else but you,
Because at 15 you grabbed her hand and threw it into another man’s hand and locked them with chains,
Even though she told you she did not want him,
But you were blinded by your pride, honour and respect.
So she made the biggest decision of her life,
To end it,
To remove the burden of her that was on you
To forever burn those tears,
And her soul now whispers into your ear, “Are you happy now, father?”

Answer 1

This is awesome. Love the writing but make it more clear about how fast it is supposed to be read.

Answer 2

Love the poem, it gives you perspective of young women who would be forced into marriage at a young age because of their name. It gives a strong tone through the story. I would guess the person would be around an teenager to an young adult because the structure of the poem isn’t complex and quite easy to read. The vocabulary isn’t difficult and common words. Although it has an adult theme in the meaning of the story talking about forced marriages