Knowing my grandfather's made me realize how fortunate I am.
Answer:
The rising action shows Bill fearlessly taking on the
storm
Explanation:
The excerpt described the tornado as fierce and roaring loud, it tried to throw Bill off but Bill rode along it until he tamed it. This shows Bill's fearlessness by being calm against a raging tornado until he calmed it and was not thrown off.
Maybe you should state the birth dates... what he had done to achieve his name and reputation and finally how as he improved the world.. maybe Alis state is it still used after he has left... remember summarizing is not recreating the whole passage in your words.. its just taking down the main points. You won't even need to do any changes to them.