Question

What form of sound repetition gives a lilting, lyrical feel to this line from "The Fish" by Elizabeth Bishop? with the swivel still attached

Answer 1

Answer: Alliteration

Alliteration refers to the repetition of the same initial consonant sounds within a group of words. Alliteration is commonly used in order to cause an emotional effect or to increase the persuasiveness of a text. Alliteration is also known as "head rhyme." In this case, the alliteration occurs in the words "swivel" and "still," which both have the same initial consonant sound.

Answer 2

Hello! The form of sound repetition that gives lilting lyrical feeling in this line from "The Fish' by Elizabeth Bishop is as follows.
"With the swivel still attached."  
Here we can see the repetition of consonants used. 
This is what is known as the literary device called 'alliteration'.
It is a type of figurative language commonly used in literature to portray sounds though usage of words.

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