Read the excerpt from "Daughter of Invention". "What ees wrrrong with her eh-speech?" Carlos wagged his head at her. His anger w
as always more frightening in his broken English. As if he had mutilated the language in his fury—and now there was nothing to stand between them and his raw, dumb anger. "What is wrong? I will tell you what is wrong. It show no gratitude. It is boastful. I celebrate myself? The best student learns to destroy the teacher?" He mocked Yoyo's plagiarized words. "That is insubordinate. It is improper. It is disrespecting of her teachers—" In his anger he had forgotten his fear of lurking spies: each wrong he voiced was a decibel higher than the last outrage. Finally, he shouted at Yoyo, "As your father, I forbid you to make that eh-speech!" What does Carlos’ language reveal about his character? His accent gets stronger when he is angry. His English vocabulary is somewhat limited. He doesn’t understand what his daughter wrote. He has trouble speaking clearly in English.
"mind-blowing" and "way less intense" are not appropriate descriptions Of the new route. They could find synonyms for these words to better suit the rest of the paragraph.
I read “Types of Shakespearean Dramas.” The organizational patterns appear to be compare and contrast with some descriptive sections. Signal phrases like “differs from” and “for example” help me see these patterns.
