Answer:
After the lazy afternoon dwindles away,
I say goodbye to all faith
to not be forced to lie awake
she gives is all I take
So please not to waste another afternoon away.
(second draft)
After the lazy afternoon dwindles away,
to see the shining start to fade
,
I stumble away from what is near
,
as I pause to look away,
I see the afternoon light flicker and fade.
Explanation:
I'm not that good at poems but I hope this helps, it's yours now
like i said im not that good at poems but I did try to make it less sad sounding.
