Usually punctuation and capitialization...
A sentence fragment is a incomplete sentence like, one that doesn't fully explain its self. fragment = came to the house, complete = Lilly came to the house to visit.
Answer:
the first sentence is not complete i would start off like.
She looked as if she was lacking of energy out the front room window There he goes, she thought to herself and quickly turned away from his sight. She has been dumped and dumped harder. He had said he was in love with her sister, and that they have been together for weeks on the sly. without seeming to tell a single soul.
Explanation:
But you can just change around some of the words if you want.
