Question

I need to write an apology cuz i prank called a pizza place to my friends house and they told my parents i was wondering if this is a good enough one and what i should do to improve it
Dear Marcos
I am sorry for my thoughtless prank on a friend that affected you. I thought that it would be funny and something that we would all find amusing. I see now that it was rude and wasteful. I never intended to waste your time and money. I am sorry for not being thoughtful of you and your employee’s time and money. I am sorry for making you drive all the way that house just to find that they did not order a pizza and you being disappointed that you did not get a tip.
Sincerely,

Answer 1

Answer:

Change last sentence to:

" I am incredible sorry for the waste of gas and time spent driving to my friends house just to find out that they did not order pizza."

Also add comma after Dear Marcos,

Explanation:

Change grammar in the last sentence:

"I am sorry for making you drive all the way that house just to find that they did not order a pizza and you being disappointed that you did not get a tip.

Sincerely," (errors underlined)

Don't mention a tip it kind of sounds like a joke. Like who would expect a tip when it was a prank.

You could also talk about how you are still young and learning to be more mature, respectful, and wise. People love stuff like that in an apology letters. Just talk about learning from your mistakes and the coming of age and stuff.