You need a subject.
Example subject: dogs and cats.
Compare: They both have fur.
Contrast statement: Dogs are energetic and cats are lazy.
P.S It makes it easier if you make a ven diaphragm
Romeo’s heartache will be healed by going to the party.
Romeo’s heartache will go away if he meets another girl.
Romeo’s heartache will lessen as he gets older.
Romeo’s heartache will be healed by a potion.
Answer:
It's very beautiful and passionate!
Tips:
-you put "once you get to the top" twice so try changing or deleting the second one.
-some common grammar mistakes (capitalize, correct spots for commas/periods, etc).
-try not to use "etc" in your writing.
-you spelled "realize" as relies
Other than those the story was good!! :)
