As it is a constitutional right, Victor should be able to inform, as well as to persuade his students. He needs to know that he must stick to the topic of voting and not impart any ideas about political parties, students have to know that have the right to do it when being adults but political tendencies should not be induced. he might explain students what is the legal age to vote, and why it should be lowered to 16 in the U.S (provide ideas to support this statement) and then inform students about Women´s suffrage in the U.S.
The reader has to keep very careful track of the character
There are many kinds (can't name them all off the top of my head)
1. Telling someone you'll keep it a secret and then tell anyway...
2. Always being there for someone and then not
3. When you cheat on your husband/wife or someone you're in a relationship with
4. Using someone just to get some
Those are all I can think of (at the moment). But you can just pick whichever one you want.
I think that this is a very good opening paragraph. I can clearly tell exactly what your writing piece will be about, and it definitely hooks me in as a reader... GOOD JOB!
