She weeps and goes to her room..
This isn't neccessarily true. Your introduction can still make sense without the hook, and the information inside the introduction part should really not directly depend on the hook to explain them, they should either be self explanatory, or you should explain them there.
Hopefully this helps!
Part A:
D, It suggests that the speaker is unhappy or troubled.
Part B:
A, He cannot sleep and needs to get out of the house.
Dialogue. He briefly explained everything he saw.
A positive so good so hope its right
