Try to avoid distractions and really pay attention to what you are doing
I’m not sure what portion you’re referring to, but I would say that he uses the rhetorical device of repetition most effectively, as he repeats “I have a dream”.
the rest is good besides the stuff at the bottom
Explanation:
mixed mixed the second and third sentence instead of a period on the second sentence do a comma. for for the sentence she became involved with theater mix it with the next sentence with a comma instead of a period.
I say the antagonist, because the devil is agaisnt the main protaginist.