1) The improvement which was done to the bolded section in the sentence to make it correct is : Repetitive words were replaced with synonyms and pronouns. As it shown in the example, there is no need to duplicate the subject 'father' as it is clear to which word the pronoun 'he' relates. We always try to enrich our speech, so it's better to say the same thing in synonymous form:hates is replaced with dislikes - all in all it sounds good, looks natural and preserves the meaning of the first sentence.
<span>2) The sentence which should be revised to eliminate redundancy is With a prediction of a deadly storm season, the alert system is needed immediately. A redundancy in a sentence is when something is repeated for no reason, when there is obvious detail that brings no sense and can be omitted. From the first sentence we know that sirens were needed, so there is no need to repeat that. </span>
<span>3) The statement which best describes how this sentence can be made more concise is : It has a phrase that can be converted to reduce wordiness. The phrase from which the sentence is started is quite long, and according to its meaning, there is a better (shorter) equivalent, which is 'if'. Now it is concise : If spy a tornado, go and seek shelter in a dark room that has no windows.</span>
The information required to correctly answer the question is unavailable hence the general answer. The exercise is about Comparing two Texts.
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How do you compare two texts?</h3>
To compare two texts, you wan to highlight the facts or things that are similar to both and the factors that make them different. Things to look out for are:
- Similarity or differences in Techniques
- Viewpoints
- Theme
- Central Ideas etc.
<h3>What is the objective of comparing two texts of literature?</h3>
The key objective for comparing two literature is that it helps to:
- enhance critical thinking; and
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<span>If 1 mole of Ca metal has a greater entropy than 1 mole of Ba metal, then this statement that was stated is false. The answer to this statement is false due to the reason that Ca metal is smaller than the Ba metal.</span>
Answer:
In the end, the "Erik Fisher Football Dream" comes crashing down when everyone discovers that he had a hand in the murder of Luis, the brother of a friend of Paul's. Towards the end of the novel, we discover further proof of Erik's sociopathic tendencies.
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Answer:
C
Explanation:
if the author is trying to define her/his/their audience they would not use the profession
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