Question

The girl sat in the boat. She stared at the shore. The girl thought about the boy. She was sad he left. She cried softly in her hands.
In at least 100 words, use parallel structure and various clause types to add detail and varied structure to the sentences in the excerpt.

Answer 1

While the girl was sitting in the boat staring at the shore she thought about the boy that had left, she was sad that he left and began to cry.

Answer 2

This should do:

She sat lonely on the boat while she thought of the boy that left and cried softly in her hands. She could not hide her sadness.


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