How can you hate people as pure as them you can hate them a much as you want but they would still love you . Like their music speaks to people and you really shouldnt make fun of peoples idol(s) because tht could be the only thing keeping them alive right now and besides all tht thir hot but yea buh thx fr your opinion i just stated the fax tho

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3 years ago

Is this creative writing?

lbvjy [14]

Answer:

Yes but there's a mistake.

Mistake: Some where in the middle

It says "Oh hey, my im Osric, we better get started".

You have to fix Oh hey, my im Osric to, "Oh hey, I'm Osric".

But, other things are that this is very creative, it mentions words like, "Vividly, rare, miniature, rigid, desolate and lingered. These are very creative words.

And yes, thanks for that awesome lil' story!

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2 years ago