depending on the person but me personally I believe a big challenge would be having to balance school , work and time with the baby. a big worry would be even if I'm making enough money to support us. another thing would be the situation of the family; having to accept possible criticism or the "boyfriend" even being there for you.
D doesnt fix the sentence because the period in this case breaks the sentence apart but into an incomplete and complete sentence.
"Sometimes he lets us play them." isnt a complete sentence which is a period isnt the way to make this run on sentence better.
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sodapop’s parents died in a car crash and his older brother darry is acting as the parent for both him and his other brother ponyboy this is all i remember sorry
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The tense is all mixed up, but it looks like present is used most often, so "emitted" should be changed to "emits" and "pulled" should be changed to "pulls." I can't see the entire paragraph so just make sure that's consistent.
You don't need a comma in "running towards us with the fire extinguisher."
"Your mother and me" should be "Your mother and I." For reference try taking our "your mother" - it sounds pretty silly to say "me thinks" unless you're in the 1600s, right? And it should be "think" instead of "thinks."
