Answer:
B
Explanation:
Out of all of them it makes the most sense, because he isn't showing pride. The grandpa isn't being rude about the situation but it also isn't showing a "bond" between them.
1st Person is the point of view for that paragraph
I'd choose this dialogue to revise your sentence:
<span>“Did you hear?” I asked them. “My painting got selected! Exciting, right?” I smiled. “Especially given that I felt so incompetent at the beginning and that the competition was ruthless!”
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It feels like the option that best uses the dialogue to improve this sentence, because the other options are either too informal or just the same sentence as the original one.
Usually the hook at the beginning or the thesis at the end. hope this helps :)
