Answer: You could write about two people meeting in a roller coaster next to each other after they were stuck on it for two hours and then after they were unstuck from the ride have them start becoming friends,and going on a date, etc and then they end up getting married and having a family you just need to add your own details :)
If you write one sentence describing the original paragraph's hook, and then a second sentence describing any supporting evidence in the paragraph, and then a third sentence describing the topic sentence, you will have written your critique.
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The answer is C , because the other sentences end in 3rd person. C starts and ends in first person, therefore C is the correct answer.
D.
George Lucas is finished with the Star Wars series after "Revenge of the Sith."
