I think the first one was correct
Explanation:
Yes..I agree with the poet that first of all we should bring change in ourselves because if we will change ourselves, people will get an impact,that how you've been changed... they'll soon try to do so,to take the benefits of the changes that you're enjoying.. right, and if people will change.. obviously nation will not take time to change..
<em>And</em><em> </em><em>You</em><em> </em><em>might</em><em> have</em><em> </em><em>heard</em><em> the</em><em> </em><em>I</em><em>dom:</em>
<em>Melon</em><em> </em><em>changes</em><em> </em><em>colour</em><em> </em><em>by</em><em> </em><em>looking </em><em>at</em><em> </em><em>melon.</em><em>.</em><em>.</em>
<em>So,</em><em> </em><em>First</em><em> </em><em>change</em><em> </em><em>your</em><em> </em><em>self</em><em> </em><em>other</em><em> </em><em>melons</em><em> </em><em>will</em><em> </em><em>change</em><em>.</em><em>.</em><em>.</em>
It depends what the explanation is about, but I’d say a diagram would be the most effective in most cases.