The thesis statement is the first sentence of this paragraph, it should be the last sentence of an introductory paragraph.
Explanation:
Leonard Bernstein -D
was an American conductor,pianist,composer,music educator,author and humanitarian.
Answer:
Julie Edwards Miyax Kapugen, known in her village as Miyax, is a fierce, adventurous Eskimo* girl who makes an unlikely friendship with a pack of Arctic wolves. She journeys to San Francisco to meet her friend, and beloved pen pal, Amy*.
*I believe the pen pal is Amy, not 100% sure though.
Amaroq, a feisty and mighty leader of the Arctic wolf pack, makes friends with an Eskimo* girl, and protects her throughout her journey to San Francisco.
*is she Eskimo or Inuit? I read something saying she was Inuit, but I'm not sure what you should write*
Hope this helps.
Answer:
Action verbs: push ups and sit ups
who is doing the action: the man
Explanation:
I'm not sure how many errors you are looking for but, this is what I got:
My Father and I, have already several states this month.
I really only see one error. Father should be capitalized because Father is a title of a person. I would also say the "I" should always be capitalized but, it looks like you already got that. Everything else seems ok.
