Question

I need help please.

Answer 1

If I won the lottery, there are three things I'd do with the money.

Freewriting: Put an amount of it into my passions: art and writing. Donate a majority of the money to homeless shelters and to people with expensive surgerys. Give the rest to friends and family in need.

Questions: How much money will I put into my passions? How much will I give to shelters? How much will I give to patients and people who need the money for surgerys? How much will I give to my friends and family?

Main idea: If I won the lottery, there are three things I'd do with the money: Put an amount of it into my passions: art and writing. Donate a majority of the money to homeless shelters and to people with expensive surgerys and give the rest to friends and family in need.

Supporting item 1: I have a passion for art and writing, and I need money to pursue these careers.

Supporting item 2: I will donate most of the money to patients and people with expensive surgerys because their life depends on it. My career can wait. This will be the first thing I do with the money.

Supporting item 3: Donate the rest to friends and family because all of my family are struggling financially.

Paragraph: If I won the lottery, there are three things I'd do with the money: Put an amount of it into my passions: art and writing; I have a passion for art and writing, and I need money to pursue these careers. Donate a majority of the money to homeless shelters and to people with expensive surgerys; their life depends on it. My career can wait. This will be the first thing I do with the money. Finally, the rest will go to friends and family in need because all of them are struggling financially.

Answer 2

Answer:

Freewriting:

If I won the lottery, I would like to spend the money buying a nice sports car, a modern home, and save the rest of the money for family. A sports car would be useful because I could get around to various places cool and quick.  Although insurance would be expensive for it, paying for it wouldn't be a struggle since I won the lottery.  Modern homes are nice since many are somewhat eco-friendly.  It would be necessary to save money for my family since I could be needing it to pay for my heirs' college or paying for a medical expense.  

Questions:

How much money did you get from the lottery?

What would you do with said money and why?

How could this money help you or others for the matter?

Scratch Outline:

Winning the lottery would make life a little easier

Support 1: Auto Insurance can be expensive, especially for starter car owners.  With the extra cash I won, I could easily pay the fees for insurance.

Support 2: Although modern homes can be expensive, the money for one is well worth it, since many run on solar energy and are built to withstand much of what the environments throws at it.

Support 3: Keeping some money for my family on the side would be important in the case that something happens to me or a family member.  I could pay the hospital bill with little to no worry on cash.  I could also store up for vacation or college for the next generation.