You tell details about the story and what it was about.
The wrongs :
I think it is clear to anyone that television is a bad influence on teenagers.(bad assumption)
Something should be done when it comes to the television habits of teenagers. (not a claim, is a recommendation)
Effective claim-
Television watching should be limited because it has negative influences on teens. (effective claim- claims televsion watching has negative INFLUENCE thus should be limited)
There are three major reasons why teen television viewing should limited(weak claim, didnt state why exactly)
Can you give more background on this. Who’s the author? What did they write about?
Answer:
This is my answer
Adichie grew up in Nigeria. In her presentation, she describes herself as a long-time storyteller and early reader. ... She says that while these stories 'stirred her imagination,' they also gave her a 'single story of what books are.
Well if you have known them in general from them being around you for a while, then you can learn a few things and speak up to them.
