From What Story Is The Question Coming From
Answer:
1. major (line 2)
2. her (line 3)
3. they (line 3)
4. her (line 5)
5. her (line 7)
6. as (line 8 - first as)
Explanation:
From the given passage, I was able to find out the 6 mistakes/errors found there.
In line 2, the word "major" is an error which isn't needed in the sentence. In line 3, it is meant to be "their" and not "her". Also, in the same line 3, it is supposed to be "It" and not "They". In line 5, it is supposed to be "their" and not "her". In line 7, the word "her" is an error which shouldn't have been added. In line 8, the first "as" is an error which shouldn't have been added in the sentence.
"circumfrance" is incorrect because its a misspelling. "circumference" is the word you're looking for.
how ever if this is not what you wanted me to look at then my bad.