Wooww...your poem is amazing...
The only idea I can suggest is to use more sophisticated vocabulary to express your thoughts and feelings and maybe a range of punctuation.
I think c or d hope that helps
Annelis Marie Fran was a lonely teenager with a sharp personality, brave, strong character, patient and decided to express herself through writing, when she was 13 year old, she takes the diary that his father gave her as a gift to tell her experience.
In her imagination she saw the diary as a friend and personalized it with the name Kitty Dear Kitty always using that expression as an introduction for his letters.
Before the Nazi occupation, Anne wrote about the life of a teenager and her family, she desired to be a novel writer, but she also wanted to write about the oppression that the Jewish people suffered in the beginning.
Anna describes the war and oppression of humans. She also describes her relationship with her family and dreamed of a free world away from the Secret Annex where she lived from 1942 to 1944 during the Nazi invasion of the Netherlands in World War II.
The nazis discovered that they were Jewish and were taken to a concentration camp.
Ana had a better relationship with his father but not with her mother and sister since she didn't feel loved or valued for her opinions for being considered such a young girl.
I think that she focuses on the ride because it was part that you like the best. She doesn’t feel very happy with your life so she tries to go to tell me good things .
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lam just guessing l did'nt read the story yet.sorry
