Answer: first of all you spelled “grad father” incorrectly it is “grandfather”
Explanation: you added a underscore but I don’t know what you mean do I need to fill in a blank but I hope you understand how to spell “grandfather” :)
The poem "The Ghost" by Walter de le Mare talks about the state of mind about a dead person. The poet says that a person after his/her death is filled with peace all over his/her body.
This paragraph is super... choppy. It needs to be more fluid. Also, the hook is, well, not present. They have a good start with "Growing flowers is one of my happiest childhood memories." You should build more on this idea of why gardening makes you happy. Through these memories you could share what you gain from gardening, and why you should stop thinking just about the time it takes but also the profit you can earn. To get rid of this "choppiness" you connect through the memories.
Hope this helps!
Romeo in Shakespeare's Romeo and Juliet.
